Friday, October 11, 2013

OOMM

Melody felt mad with her mom because she could not tell her that Ollie  jumped out of her bowl. Melody’s mom said Melody what have you done? Melody wanted to answer her mom. In the story “she was angry I was too’’

I think Ollie and Melody are the same because they both can’t move around a lot and both can not talk 

3 comments:

  1. your blog post is so good. I also think Melody and Ollie are alike

    sincerely Daniel,

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  2. Dear Lulu,

    Melody is usually pretty patient, but this time, she really lost her patience. I don't blame her because she lost her favorite pet! (Until Butterscotch came along!)

    -Mrs. A.

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  3. Dear Lulu,
    I would also feel mad if i couldn't express my feelings. I love the way you wrote this post. how would you feel if you were Melody?
    Sincerely,

    Shoshana

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