Thursday, October 10, 2013

Out of my mind

                 Out of my mind

Melody and Olly are the same because they can not talk or walk but they can both think and see and move.

I think the story of Olly is important , because Olly meant a lot to Melody and their life is almost the same.

I think Melody felt hurt when her mom yelled at her even though she did not spill the fish bowl .I feel bad for Melody  because she cant tell her mom it was not her.

Do you think Melodys life and Olly's life are like the same?





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  1. Emalei AmbrosioOctober 10, 2013 at 8:25 PM

    Hi Beloria,

    I agree with you that Ollie's life and Melody's life are almost the same. They are definitely both "stuck" in the same place all the time. Melody's mind is kind of like a fish bowl. There is movement in there, but it can never get out!

    Thanks for the good question!

    -Mrs. A.

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  2. beloriaOctober 15, 2013 at 7:27 PM

    Thank you

    -Beloria

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  3. UnknownNovember 8, 2013 at 10:45 AM

    Dear Beloria,

    you blog post is great. If I was Ollie or Melody I would die because I could not talk.
    From, Nina

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  4. ShoshanaFebruary 20, 2014 at 4:44 PM

    Dear Beloria,
    I do think Melody and Olly's life is the same. You wrote that really well. Do you think Olly's and Melodys lie are the same?

    Sincerely Shoshana

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