I think I did very well on making paragraphs sound good, look good and putting a lot of evidence in to it. I think this because if I didn't add these things in to my paragraphs I would not get such a good grade on writing. To be a writer you have to put a lot of effort in to your paragraphs, make it long, make it neat, sound clearly and putting a lot of evidence.
I need to make my paragraphs better by making them longer and taking more time on them to make them great. I think this, because if I don't do these things then I won't be able to be a good writer. I would like to try to remember to double check my work for spelling, grammar and punctuation.
Dear Beloria,
ReplyDeleteNice job on accomplishing all of your examples on how to be a good writer. What do you think was your best paragraph that had all the things that you were talking about. For examples evidence.
Sincerely Jakey.