My life was perfect I visited my Grandma
every day we talked about what I did at school and what I did this weekend, she
loved to hear me play the piano and sing she loved music. Something that everyone
loved about her is that she loved to help people she used to give jobs to
people that she didn't now everyone loved her she used to say that if you help people they will
help you back when you need it, that’s true.
But in 2007
to 2008 my Grandma went to the doctor
because she had a pain in her back so when she got there the doctors examined her and they said that she had cancer in her kidney my
mom was surprise because she was a healthy women how did she get cancer!!!!!she said .
My family were upset but my Grandma didn't look upset she was calm and looked like
nothing has happened. The days passed and she was having a treatment with a lot
of different doctors, one of them said that she will less than a week another a
month so we took her home to have her last moments with as but she lived for 9 months!! we were so happy we couldn't believe it, the doctors ether. But after
those long 9 months she was in the hospital she was feeling really bad, my mom
knew she was going to die so she called my sister and me and we talked to her for
the she was really excited, I talked to her about how much I loved her
and how much I was going to miss her. One minute later my Grandma told my mom "you
shouldn't cry be a strong women" .After my mom said silently it’s time than
there was a moment of silent a minute after she die. No on cried. My Grandma was a positive women she was happy all the time and never
cried I am never going to forget her.
No one is
going to live forever that’s life.
Has something like this has happened ?
How will you feel if something like that happen to
you?
Do you know someone that lived that
What do you think about this story ?
Did you learned something?
Dera Kebira,
ReplyDeleteI learned something but you spelled learned wrong it should be did you learn something. I like how you went through the whole story of your grandma and That is amazing.
-Emma
Dear Kebira,
ReplyDeleteI really appreciated your personal narrative about your grandmother. I was very close with my grandmothers, too. They were so special to me, and I was very sad when they died. I think about them all the time, and appreciate all of things that they taught me.
It sounds like your grandmother was a wonderful person. Your narrative described how loving she was, and how your family took such great care of her. You did a great job giving examples, so I felt like I understood your relationship with your grandmother.
Thank you for writing this narrative!
Sincerely,
Jamie (Sam's mom)
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ReplyDeleteDear Daughter: Your grandmother was a great example of "strong woman" She would be very proud of you.
DeleteThank you for writing about it. You really surprised me!
I love you, Your mom Netzah
Thanks
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DeleteKebira,
ReplyDeleteThis is such a sweet story about your grandma. It sounds like she was an amazing lady. You were lucky to know her and to have her legacy to help you in hard times. Thank you for sharing this story with us.
I'm so proud of your work on this story. Your revisions made it better each time. You are a beautiful writer!
-Mrs. A.
Dear Kebira,
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post you did amazing on your blog post.
-Shimon
Dear Kebira,
ReplyDeleteyour grandma sound like an amazing woman. I like how you told great stories about your grandma
-Emma