Thursday, October 10, 2013

Out of my mind

Melody and Ollie are very similar For Example ,they are both in a world of their own and they both can’t talk or walk they both wish they were different.

The author told the the story of Ollie the fish because she wanted to compare there lives.

Melody felt angry because her mom misunderstood her and also her fish died.

 I know this because in the story it said that Melody was very angry.                                                      
                                                                                                                    


2 comments:

  1. Dear Ben,

    You said that the author told the story of Ollie because she wanted to compare their lives. How could you compare their lives? What is similar between Ollie and Melody?

    -Mrs. A.

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  2. Dear Ben,

    The author can compare Meldoy and Ollie lime you said. Do you know how they are the same? I see what you mean by there similar, but i still want to see what you think. I think her mother should understand what happens in Melody's life more. Peny Meldoy's little sister, do you think she cares at all about Meldoy.?


    From, Jeremy

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