Thursday, October 10, 2013

Out Of My Mind

 We are reading out of my mind by Sharen Daper
Ollie is important because Ollie is like melody so they are close. When the fish jump out of the bowl he wanted to die so did Melody when she found out she cannot do anything.

Melody is mad because her mom does not understand her because in the story she was shouting because her fish was dying and her mom came in and said why did you tip the fish bowl and the mom asked why did you tip of the gold fish?

Ollie story is cool because it was just like melody. Ollie’s life was just like melody because the fish cannot do anything but going in same circle. Melody wanted to jump out of her mind like when she wanted to get fast food and her dad did not know that she wanted fast food.

HOW Would you feel if you were melody? 

3 comments:

  1. Dear Nina,

    I loved how you said that "Melody wanted to jump out of her mind." You just the title and what happened to Ollie to explain Melody's feelings! How interesting.

    If I were Melody, I would also want to jump out of my mind sometimes. Maybe this is what happens when she has a tornado explosion!

    -Mrs. A.

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  2. Hi Nina,
    Its Abby. I love how you wrote this post. I would feel soooooo overwhelmed. How would you feel?

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