Thursday, October 10, 2013

Out of My Mind


Melody was like hear fish because they both can’t talk, and walk .Melody is also like her fish because they can’t say what is going on in there brain. Ollie jumped out of a tank. And could not breath. And Melody could not get her mom to get up in time. So Melody put water on the fish but it died. Melody felt stupid when she could not tell her mom what really happened when she got there.

Is Melody Going To Learn How To Talk and Walk ?

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  1. I think that your right that she is like the fish because both of them need others to help them survive. They also can't talk to others so what they really wan't might never be known. I hope that at the end of the book she finds out a way to communicate. Do you think she'll find one?

    Thanks for reading, Evan

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  2. Great observation Jakey, it must feel very frustrating to not be heard and understood. I do hope she finds a way to some how communicate. Keep me posted!!

    Mommy

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    1. Mom, Thank you mom for commenting !!! I agree with you that it is frustrating to not heard and understood .

      Jakey

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  3. Hi Jakey,

    You are right about how Ollie and Melody are similar! Can you even imagine how hard it must be to not be able to communicate?

    I hope that Melody finds a way to communicate. We will find out soon! :)

    Keep up the great work,
    -Mrs. A.

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    1. Dear Mrs. A Melody has finely got a computer to help her communicate it must be very easy to talk!!! Jakey

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  4. Jakey, I really like how you understand how frustrating it must be for Melody to not be able to communicate with her mother. She also must have felt sad that her fish died. I am curious to know the rest of the story. I see you also explained that she got a computer and now she can communicate. How does she feel about that. Nona

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  5. Hi, my name is Tim, and I am from St. Louis. I go to school at Glenridge. I have not read the book, but I am very interested in this book. I will try to read it as soon as I can, but I have a suggestion for you: Sahara Special. It is very funny, and it is very touching. Timothy

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  6. Hi Jakey,
    I have not read the book Out of My Mind, but I'm very interested in it. Would you recommend it to me?
    I have a suggestion for you. Read Sahara Special. It's very funny and touching. I read it as part of our book groups and enjoyed it. I am from St. Louis and go to Glenridge.
    I'm looking forward to getting to know you.
    Timothy

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