Wednesday, March 12, 2014

Jakey's literary Essay

     Friends can change each other’s life. Winn Dixie didn’t have a home, Opal took him home so he would have a home. Opal didn’t have a mom so instead she had Winn Dixie. Loosing Winn Dixie was extremely hard. Loosing Winn Dixie also changed Opals life but when Opal found Winn Dixie she felt better. Opal changed from how she was from the last time she had Winn Dixie. Winn Dixie changes Opals life.

     Friends can change each other’s life. Opal and Winn Dixie met at a store called Winn Dixie. Opal was getting food from the store and called the dog that she took Winn Dixie because that’s where they met. This is why friends can change each other’s life because instead of a mom Opal had Winn Dixie and that made her feel a little better. Opal changed Winn Dixie’s life because Winn Dixie didn’t have e a home and was just a dog that now one cared about. I think that Because of Winn Dixie by Kate Di Camilo is a good book. I think this because Winn Dixie made Opal have many friends and hear are a couple of them. Otis, Gloria Dump and Mrs. Frany. Winn Dixie made Opal be friends with Mrs. Frany because when Mrs. Frany saw Winn Dixie it reminded her of the story about the bear. So than they started to talk and Mrs. Frany told her a story about the bear and that is how they became friends. Winn Dixie made Gloria Dump and Opal friends because when Winn Dixie was running he ran into Gloria Dumps yard and Winn Dixie and Opal had a peanut butter sandwich.

     What Opal did with her new friends/Winn Dixie? What Opal did with Winn Dixie was make him have a home and what Winn Dixie did to Opal didn’t have a mom and instead she had Winn Dixie. Opal and Winn Dixie’s friends have had parties and Opal has set them up with her friends.

Loosing Winn Dixie. Opal had a broken heart when she lost Winn Dixie. She was looking everywhere but just couldn’t find him. In the end Winn Dixie was in Gloria Dumps house under her bed. I know this because Otis needed to play his guitar to make Winn Dixie get out. This changed Opals life because Winn Dixie was instead of her mom. What Opal realized was that she could of just lost the thing that had changed her life because she doesn’t have a mom.
Friends can help other’s in each other’s life. If you’re new to a school you need friend to help you in it.

9 comments:

  1. Dear Jakey,
    I really liked your Literary essay. I loved all the words you used. It helped me understand most of it. How long did it take you to right it?

    LOVED IT!
    -Shoshana

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    1. Dear Shoshana,

      All together it took about three week's. But it took me about two week's just to write it and it took about one week to write it on a computer and publish it.

      -Jakey

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  2. Dear Jakey,

    I completely agree with you there is pretty much nothing I can argue with anything at all, like I said I completely agree with you.

    -Yaniv

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  3. Dear Jakey,
    I really liked your blog post. I agree with you that Friends can change each others life.
    Sincerely, Josh.

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  4. Dear Jakey,
    I aree that friends can change your life because if you don't have friends than you won't have a social life. I like how you said in a specific way how Opal and Winn-Dixie changed each other lives.

    -Judah

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  5. Dear Jakey,

    I really liked how you explained how Winn-Dixie changed Opal's life. The reason that I say this is that, just like you said, since Opal din't have her mom she had Winn-Dixie; and with Winn-Dixie she made all of these new friends to keep her compony.

    ~Great job Jakey!~

    Sincerely, Binyamin

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  6. Dear Jakey,

    I liked your blogpost it was really good, I thought you gave a lot of details, I liked that you said friends can change your life because I agree with that.

    Sam

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  7. Dear Jakey,
    I love your blog post you showed good dialogue.
    -Shimon

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  8. Jakey,

    It is clear that you understood how much Winn-Dixie changed Opal's life. You gave great examples. I especially liked how you said that meeting Gloria happened because of Winn-Dixie and that changed Opal's life.

    What did Gloria do/say that helped Opal see her world in a new way?

    -Mrs. A.

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